grammar fixes

server/configuration.org

@@ -11,10 +11,9 @@
 
 
 * DECLARATION
-Here I will declare the dependencies and variables that will be used multiple
+Here I will declare the dependencies and variables that I call multiple times
-times through the config file, such as the current version of NixOS,
+through the config file, such as the current version of NixOS, repositories and
-repositories and even some scripts that will be reused on systemd
+even some scripts that I reuse on systemd configurations.
-configurations.
 
 - version: used by both NixOS and home-manager to dictate the state repository
   from which to pull configurations, modules and packages.
@@ -26,7 +25,7 @@ configurations.
 - unstable: a sort of overlay that allows to prepend "unstable" to a package,
   to pull from the unstable channel rather than precompiled binaries on a case
   by case use.
-- jawz*: scripts that will be reused multiple times through the config, such as
+- jawz*: scripts that will reuse multiple times through the config, such as
   on systemd, and as such this feels like a safe way to compile them only once.
 
 #+begin_src nix
@@ -51,12 +50,6 @@ let
     "sub-sync" (builtins.readFile ../scripts/sub-sync.sh);
   jawzStream = pkgs.writeScriptBin
     "stream-dl" (builtins.readFile ../scripts/stream-dl.sh);
-  jawzScripts = [
-    jawzManageLibrary
-    jawzTasks
-    jawzSubs
-    jawzStream
-  ];
 in
 { # Remember to close this bracket at the end of the document
 #+end_src
@@ -87,8 +80,8 @@ hosts file with the static IP and hostname of other devices on my network.
 
 Also open ports on the firewall for LAN connectivity, and well keeping commented
 what each port does, I declared the firwewall ports with variables, because I
-can not be bothered to figure out whether I need TCP or UDP so let's open both,
+don't care to figure out whether I need TCP or UDP so let's open both, and
-and repetition is maddening.
+repetition is maddening.
 
 #+begin_src nix
 powerManagement.cpuFreqGovernor = lib.mkDefault "performance";
@@ -321,9 +314,6 @@ packages = (with pkgs; [
 cli and tui packages, which on their own right are as or more powerful than the
 packages on the previous section.
 
-=note= exa is no longer maintained, and will soon be replaced by eza, a maintained
-fork.
-
 ** HUNSPELL
 These dictionaries work with Firefox, Doom Emacs and LibreOffice.
 
@@ -339,12 +329,6 @@ Themes and other customization, making my DE look the way I want is one of the
 main draws of Linux for me.
 
 #+begin_src nix
-# Fonts
-(nerdfonts.override {
-  fonts = [ "CascadiaCode"
-            "ComicShannsMono"
-            "Iosevka" ];
-})
 symbola
 #+end_src
 
@@ -368,7 +352,10 @@ smartmontools # check hard drie health
 Here I compile my own scripts into binaries
 
 #+begin_src nix
-jawzScripts
+jawzManageLibrary
+jawzTasks
+jawzSubs
+jawzStream
 (writeScriptBin "ffmpeg4discord" (builtins.readFile ../scripts/ffmpeg4discord.py))
 (writeScriptBin "ffmpreg" (builtins.readFile ../scripts/ffmpreg.sh))
 (writeScriptBin "split-dir" (builtins.readFile ../scripts/split-dir.sh))
@@ -450,7 +437,7 @@ Libraries & apps not found on the nix-store and scripts made by me.
 #+end_src
 
 ** NODEJS PACKAGES
-Mostly language servers and linters.
+Language servers and linters.
 
 #+begin_src nix
 ]) ++ (with pkgs.nodePackages; [
@@ -585,8 +572,8 @@ packages through home-manager.
 
 #+begin_src nix
 programs = {
-  tmux = {
+  helix = {
-   enable  = true;
+    enable = true;
   };
   hstr.enable = true;
   emacs.enable = true;
@@ -731,6 +718,7 @@ of some services.
 #+begin_src nix
 programs = {
   starship.enable = true;
+  tmux.enable = true;
   fzf.fuzzyCompletion = true;
   neovim = {
     enable = true;
@@ -744,7 +732,7 @@ programs = {
 #+end_src
 
 * SERVICES
-Miscellaneous services, most of which are managed by systemd.
+Miscellaneous services, managed by systemd.
 
 - minidlna: allows me to watch my media on my TV.
 - avahi: allows to discover/connect to devices through their hostname on the
@@ -843,12 +831,12 @@ in [ myPkg ];
         wantedBy = [ "default.target" ];
         path = [
           pkgs.nix
-          jawzChat
+          jawzStream
         ];
         serviceConfig = {
           Restart = "on-failure";
           RestartSec = 30;
-          ExecStart = "${jawzChat}/bin/stream-dl ${channel}";
+          ExecStart = "${jawzStream}/bin/stream-dl ${channel}";
         };
       };
     in {
@@ -858,12 +846,12 @@ in [ myPkg ];
         wantedBy = [ "default.target" ];
         path = [
           pkgs.nix
-          jawzChat
+          jawzStream
         ];
         serviceConfig = {
           Restart = "on-failure";
           RestartSec = 30;
-          ExecStart = "${jawzChat}/bin/stream-dl %I";
+          ExecStart = "${jawzStream}/bin/stream-dl %I";
         };
       };
       "stream-johnneal911" = streamService "johnneal911" // { };
@@ -940,7 +928,7 @@ in [ myPkg ];
     in {
       "stream-johnneal911" = streamTimer // { };
       "stream-uk2011boy" = streamTimer // { };
-      "stream-tomayto\x20picarto" = streamTimmer // { };
+      "stream-tomayto\x20picarto" = streamTimer // { };
       # tasks = {
       #   enable = true;
       #   description = "Run a tasks script which keeps a lot of things organized";
@@ -983,8 +971,8 @@ fonts.fontconfig.enable = true;
 #+end_src
 
 * HARDWARE
-Computer-specific hardware settings.  The power management settings are
+Computer-specific hardware settings.  The power management settings default to
-defaulted to "performance".
+"performance".
 
 - nvidia: GPU drivers.
 - cpu.intel: microcode patches.

workstation/configuration.org

@@ -438,11 +438,11 @@ pureref # create inspiration/reference boards
 So far gaming has been a lot less painful than I could have originally
 anticipated, most everything seems to run seamlessly.
 
-Most packages on this section are set to unstable so we compile the newest
+Most packages on this section are unstable so we compile the newest
-possible binaries, which is handy mostly for frequently developed emulators.
+possible binaries, which is handy for frequently developed emulators.
 
-I never figured out why, but lutris will give me wine errors unless both wine64
+Lutris will give me wine errors unless both wine64 and wineWow are both
-and wineWow are installed.
+installed.
 
 =note= Steam is setup way later on the config file.
 =note= Roblox uninstalled as there is ongoing drama regarding Linux users.